How you doing!
I loved the beginning, then at abour 1:14 it seemed like it just disappeared and went into somesort of house funk style music. And after that it felt as though you were just trying random stuff out.without putting much thought into it. You got some skills, try not to repeat the same thing for too long either though.
Maybe hit back a few of my songs, You faved me, maybe you'll find some other stuff you like?
I really like this nonetheless. 5'd and 9'd
Keep it up!