Oh, I see we are moving at a higher, professional level of a composition.
5/5 rating for the awesome melody you composed. It was really exciting to listen to it and triggered me listening to the full length of the work.
Here are some tips and suggestions from my side for your future works:
- Since it is some kind of goal to make a soundtrack like that sound as realistic as possible, you should work more with reverb and hall effects. Imagine, that the orchestra plays in a really big concert hall, or score stage. If you play more with hall effects, the track will sound more organic itself.
- It sounds like you placed all played instruments in the center. You should inform yourself how an orchestral band is build-up and where the instruments are placed it.
You should put some instruments more in the side (left or right), to make your song sound more surrounding.
- You should try to separate first and second instruments. Put some instruments in the background and some other's in the foreground (solist instruments for example).
- This is a bit related to what I just said about the first and second instruments. Since you literally only used first instruments, the actionful part of the song went a bit noisy.
But in general, this one was very nice to listen and I give it a rating of 4.5