After listening to your "Jurrasic Park" remix i decided to download another song, and i saw this one.
And its really good.
Here are 2 things that could have made it even better.
1. A beat would have been cool but thats just my oppinion
2. It was a wee bit too long. I like to keep my songs from 1:30-4:00. But that is also just my oppinion.
You dont have to do those things, thats just my personal view.
Great job on this and keep up the awesome work!