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May 5, 2007 | 12:06 AM EDT
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340.7 KB
9 sec
2.71 / 5.00

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Rated 2.71 / 5 stars
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632 Plays | 88 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

This is my first atempt at hip hop. I think its my best.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Not Hip-Hop but w.e

Like Para-Noid said it's not realy Hip-Hop, more of a dance song, it's not bad tho for a first. I've noticed that transition from one genre to the other is hard so i think you should stick with w.e you like the most man. Anyway this ain't bad for a first attempt, 5d it,
Save the Earth
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

BlackPlastic responds:

I must really not know what hip hop is since your the second person to say its dance.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This reminds me...

I got a song I made that's hip hop but I never posted it up on NG. You should hear sometime.

Btw, your Hip Hop song needs more beats. More Hi-hats.

BlackPlastic responds:

I PUT MORE FUCKING HI HATS IN IF I FUCKING WANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And sure Ill listen and review it once you put it up.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


Yeah, I could picture someone rapping over this... I'd go with ped and say you should add more to it, but in this case the beat might end up getting things a little cluttered. maybe just a high synth? or even a siren? and then, you know, get a friend to spit some sick lyrics over it... then you're golden.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Yeah about Hip-Hop

Ok, this may sounds rude but stick to flashes. Flashes only man. I see you probably may have startewd but if you can't figure out what Hip-Hop is then don't do hip-hop no more. This is a Dance song for sure. But I see where your coming from to let it be Hip-Hop.

The whole song is off-beat too. The snyth and the Drums. Aaaaaaaaall off-beat. But like I said earlier, keep on trying, not everybody is good when they first start fruity loops or reason.


BlackPlastic responds:

Hey Im just experimenting. It doesnt have to be the best song in the world if I want to submit it.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


yeh, sounds pretty empty, you should work on developing it further, bring in some more sounds and that and work on the beat, the kick sounds a little off.
go forth

BlackPlastic responds:

Thanks for the advice