This is a very nice song if I must say. A few problems though, first of all, I don't think the beginning around :00 to :24 is suiting for this kind of song. I don't know, it doesn't actually feel like it's building up to something. It was also a bit repetitive in some of parts, maybe you could change the melodies a bit once in a while? Then, I don't actually what you were trying to do at 2:00, because the synth playing at the background [whatever you call it] kind of feels off-key I guess? Idk really. Overall, I really like it, especially how you transition from part to part, but there was some things I don't feel fitting for this song, such as the beginning and around the 2-minute mark.