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LM - Obliviate

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Another Harry Potter spell. This song is so good you will forget you heard it! (obliviate is used to hide a memory of a particular event :v) Made with www.audiotool.com/app. Enjoy!

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I love simply awesome and unsurpassed

Okay, this does need some work. Maybe you should learn a bit of music theory. I will scout you when I see a bit of improvement. Anyway, keep it up!

LordMoldemort responds:

Ok thank you!

As a person who tends to enjoy perfect harmony, this sounds really messed up.

It was fine from 0:00-0:16 - it sounded a bit interesting. But as it passed 0:17, the mallets sound started to sound weird. That was still fine for me since I understood that you were trying to add some more creativity. But then, after a few seconds, it destroyed my hope. It remained weird until the end of the song. No chord progressions, no surprising elements, just a weird chord lines from the mallets and the same old wompy bassline. I had to turn off this song half-way.

And also, I don't even know if this is a Video Game track. Why not just turn this into Experimental? That could make much more sense.

I hope this doesn't make you offended or anything, but I just wanted to share my thoughts with you, as another fellow musician. I know that you're trying to be creative, and experiment the instruments you have. But it still needs work. A lot of work. I'm not good at teaching things, but all I can say is to listen to many tracks and try to research the elements inside it. That could help you create better tracks in the future. I also listened to your track, "Incendio", and honestly that was much better than this one, even you followed the same method. So yes, even if you used online tools with limitations, you can still create a better piece.

I give you great encouragement to try to keep working on it. Keep up the good work.

LordMoldemort responds:

Thank you for the criticism. It helps me to learn from other musicians. I changed the genre to experimental.

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3.44 / 5.00

Jun 28, 2018
10:37 AM EDT
File Info
5.4 MB
3 min 51 sec

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