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Nah, you can't be real
You seem like a dream to me,
But I still wanna keep you around.

Look in my eyes
What do you see
Tell me the truth, girl
Beauty or beast?
Cus im not too sure myself,
For a while I've been someone else

And it's pulling away, pulling away,
Yeah I've been in a haze, been in a haze
And all of my days just seem to blend together
But I'll tell you what's up, I've never felt better.

Yeah I'm alright, alright
Tell me the truth, girl, don't you lie
Are we dancing in the rain or waiting in line
For you to kiss me with your eyes open one last time?
Nah, I won't get mad.
Come on listen, I won’t mad.
How could I blame you?
How could I blame you?

When I just blame myself.

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Really moody and distorted texture. The sudden pauses in the piano riff (:17, :34, etc.) don't quite work for me. Otherwise, it's a really flowy piece, but those bits interrupt that flow. Vocals have a lot of passion, and the lyrics themselves are also really good. Sounds more like a one-sided conversation than anything else, which I really like. I guess my only major complaint is that it's not structurally complete. Could also use some additions to the texture to show a little more directionality. Still, I especially like what you've done with the piano and vocals here. Keep up the great work, Steelside!

Great vocals and piano, sample? Well, the drums maybe can be tweaked and this track def deserves perfecting.

Sick af, this is super clean. No notes

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steelside
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Uploaded
Jun 20, 2018
1:20 AM EDT
Genre
Hip Hop - Olskool
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4.6 MB
2 min 0 sec
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