Really moody and distorted texture. The sudden pauses in the piano riff (:17, :34, etc.) don't quite work for me. Otherwise, it's a really flowy piece, but those bits interrupt that flow. Vocals have a lot of passion, and the lyrics themselves are also really good. Sounds more like a one-sided conversation than anything else, which I really like. I guess my only major complaint is that it's not structurally complete. Could also use some additions to the texture to show a little more directionality. Still, I especially like what you've done with the piano and vocals here. Keep up the great work, Steelside!