Needs a lot of improvement.
Get rid of that beat. It sounds absolutely horrible.
The snare cuts off too soon, and it just doesn't sound right like that. Apart from that, it's a slightly decent drumloop that you probably could have used in a longer song (as long as you removed that horrendous beep). No offense, but this song really, really...sucks. Keep practicing a lot more.
Since you review alot of songs I'll review yours. Hmm not very upbeat. Making music is all about experimenting with new things so I guess you could use this loop for your future full length songs. This is a extremely short loop. That beeping sound gets annoying. I'll wait till you have a full length song in the future. I can't really review this 1 second loop. So 5/5 and 8/10 review. Bye for now
"I guess you could use this loop for your future full length songs"
Hmm probably should have saved it then