this is a good song but you made it wierd by putting in the harmonica, i have been listinging to your songs and i want to say that they are very good and i love soundscapes and stuff like that, but they do get repetitive after a while.
I dunno if id say it sounds like a TRAIN.. you need the ca-chunk ca-chunk noise for it to sound like a train..
I always find it hard to review music like this - I like the instrument that comes in around :50 - its nice and warm in its presence..but i found that weird 8-bitty sawwwey sound over it kind of ruins it.. its too loud and present imo.. you get used to it I suppose...
I could see that instrument benefiting from some point-panning - where its liek WEE --> ee WEE <--ee kinda ping ponging back and forth on each note.. hard to explain. I like the spacey earthboundesque sounds in the background though :P
4:00 is nice its very relaxing.. buut then it gets weird again aroun 4:12 haha. I wonder if this is a reflection of your mind - calm on the outside with inner chaos and weirdness roiling about..
I'm sure empty trains to nowhere sound like this, although I must admit I haven't actually heard one.
I can agree the bitcrushed pad is a bit in-yer-face, maybe I could put a filter on it or something. "WEE --> ee WEE <--ee"? You would be a great poet but I don't really see what you meant with that sentence :P
And no my mind isn't quite like that, again that's very poetic though.
You know... I was looking through your music and voting 5's... and then I saw this song. I then realized why I started making music in the first place. It was this song... this very song that I first listened to on newgrounds... that made me want to become an audio artist. I loved it, every note, every beat, and every synth. The combination of synths is what got to me. And the title... that title means something you know? This is truly a remarkable piece... and it has started me on the road to ambient music. I know what your thinking after reading this... your thinking I am either sucking up to you, or I have a strange taste in music. Well, I simply can not tell you in words how much this song means to me. Thank you. Oh, and I was wondering what you would happen to think on my next song... You review mine and I am glad that youn do. I put all my strength together, and made one final song before mid-terms start.
(::Towards The Sun::)
Enjoy SBB, and I hope you can agree that it is a 10. =)
Well that's amazing... I started someone off making music- I've always wanted to do that :D.
Lemme just say something and that's that I FUCKING LOVE THIS SONG and that's most likely because it's the a song I made from a huge friggin bomb of inspiration I got that made me wrote this, Light Flow, Night, and Watching The World Go By, nah enough about me
Thanks for the review buddy <3
nice tittle... nice song...
the intro was a little long...
& it's kind of simple
but... then it was pretty good
lookin' back at it
yeah it's really, really simple
This was truly Elsey. Thanks iloveritalin, for saying elsey. You sucked my mind.
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