First 50 seconds, amazing.
0:50:1:00 not necsisary
1:23 bass lead shouldn't be in the buildup and drop
1:54 Nice relaxing break
2:06 Good segway
2:24 Great buildup, just wish the clapping was a different sample. Mess with the Amp a little
2:38 Don't cut out tracks or add bass until the drop. Not a fan of this part
2:52 I wish this had a better transition. Try a couple seconds of silence to part the two segments.
2:55 This part doesn't have to be buildup, but sounds nice anyways.
3:07 i LOVE this buildup, you nailed it!
3:21 Also like the drum roll
3:22 I wish the first second of the drop had a more bass-heavy Boomer sample.
3:28 I wish you just made the swishes quieter and didn't cut them.
3:28 I like the deep synth lead, but it could have a high-end harmony synth to accompony it.
3:38 I like the shooting sample.
3:55 Wraps up nicely.
All and all, great start. I loved some things and hated others. Hopefully you take the time and try to impliment the solutions to the problems in this song to future ones. You have a lot of potential. Keep on making music!