Good, but needs some work
The beat at the start, is a bit too loud i think.
I like the twinkle sounds.
But it gets a bit too repetitive.
I like the synth you add after it, and the falling star sound.
The orchestrals are really nice too.
Good song, but work a bit more on the variety in melody's the next time.
Changing some notes, some times can help with that.
Keep it up! ;)
thanks for the comment ill take it into consideration