I like the piano riff at the beginning. The panning is really strong at :12, and the mix could be a tad clearer. I like the sound design and the cutesy mood, but I think the mastering needs a lot of work. Throughout the piece, there are these stereo clicks that sound really harsh in my ears. This is probably due to peaking, which means that you need to bring down the volume levels a bit to eliminate distortion in the texture. I also think that the piano riff is too loud vis-à-vis the more melodic instruments, and a lot of the instruments could sound a lot more distinct with some stricter equalization and compression. The composition and atmosphere of the piece are both really refreshing, and the instruments are pretty cool. But the production quality seriously detracts from my enjoyment of the piece. Fix the mixing issues and you're well on your way. Keep at it, man. ;)
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A song for a new proyect that i'm doing.
benja14xd responds:
1.- Thanks, I enjoy making music for people like you.
2.- Most part of the sound are ripped from my yamaha keyboard
3.- I will fix the "pop" (is a vst that create that "pop" sound)
4.- the sounds aren't equalized (only low pass and hi pass) but i will try to make a good eq.
5.- thanks again.
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