Beautiful atmosphere at the beginning. Not sure how I feel about the heavy use of panning on the percussion, though. My intuition says that rhythm section - drum and bass - should be front and center in all but the most experimental mixes. Mix could also be a bit louder here. That said, I really like the progression and the soothing vibe of this one. I like how there's a short breakdown at 1:23 or so, like someone pushed the reset button. The rich vocal chords at 1:55 were really nice. Didn't quite feel like the piece was over at the end, though. I'd love to see you flesh out the structure of this a little more, maybe with a more dramatic climax at the end. Still, really flowing cinematic vibes here. I like it a lot!