Intro was intriguing, I think you have the feel on spot, but the notes are a bit off. It got better while listening a bit more 1:00 - 2:00 ~ Things fall into place. Recommendation: Add variation to those violins hitting staccato in the background (ascend in volume for more oomph). 3-3:30 could use a bit more. I loved 3:23 with the piano... especially 3:35. You took a chance and it went in the right direction. This is gold. Once again the violins in the background feel emotionless, but that's not a big hassle to change now.. is it ;)?