Sounds like some small mixing problems in the cast -- having trouble paying attention with the reverby low end around 200-300 Hz. It's right around where your voice sits in the track and is only slightly less loud.
Otherwise, accomplishes what you wanted to accomplish.
I would however mention that people should /not/ be asking to be scouted in general, but if an unscouted user wants to participate in the contest, mentioning that in the discussion thread should be fine. The Geometry Dash issues and someone uploading a stolen song as a "joke" in one of the competitions last year makes mods and staff very leery of that kind of stuff.