I like the blissful synth patterns at the beginning and the crisp hi-hats. The piece is a little slow to progress, but there’s a good sense of climax into :41. The melodic content at :41 is a little hard to discern in the mix. It’s pretty quiet relative to the bass and harmonies, and there may be some odd filtering, volume automations, or distortions that are keeping it from cutting through the mix like I wanted it to. After that point, the composition is pretty repetitive, and I wanted to see you flesh out the structure a bit more here. An atmospheric bridge or breakdown would really help add some more shape to this piece. Still, the mood and instruments are cute, and (despite the mixing issues) I enjoyed the melodies. Keep at it, Citriclight! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.25/10