-like some reviewer said, the music is too repetitive, bring something new! not some new insturments! do twists! change something!
-need to have more bass
-i cannot not to see your effort here, with the rich variety of instruments
-there are no collisions between all the sounds and its good
well, i can't say this is the best melodic ive seen, because mines are more melodic. they might include less instruments however. you should check my new song "Happiness and Sadness" http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1814435 in the time 02:45 the CPU load was 100% and during this part there was an average of 36 polyphonic and a peak of 46 poly. i make them quiet so u gotta turn ur volume a little to hear all of them.
I have a song named that- and I was first >:(
It's not the most melodic piece I've heard really, but you're right it's melodic. there's some more rhytmic effects in the melody when it goes on later, with the midi delay and so
the drums are okay, but seriously repetitive and doesn't seem to hold enough. Needs either more velocity or more volume.
This is kool
Didn't mean to steal a title, I just name my songs after I'm finished making them, I don't really check on newgrounds if somebody else made a song with the same. I wasn't going for that much of a melodic piece as I was 80's dance style. I might remaster this with lyrics added too. Glad you like my song, I'll check out your "traveling".