Honestly, it's fairly good.
I'm a bit surprised at the low score that it has - it's a minimalist piece to be sure, but it sounds pleasant enough and I can imagine it being usefull to someone in some flash. It's very simplicity makes it kinda nice to listen to.
Later on there are some dissonances - maybe a bit too many of them. I can tell that this isn't your usual category, but it's pretty nice, overall.
Cheers, yeah It was pary of another song but then i thought it'd be pretty good on its own.
I wanted to add another level to it so put a choir on it, and that was abit crap, and some notes didn't really fit.
Thanks for your review.