The bass could use some more layers, it sounds like it's sust a sub. the song could also be overall wider in the mix. Other than that, it's pretty good :)

Jesus Christ, the start almost made me think it would be Darude - Sandstorm.

This song has a severe lack of bass. I want bass.
Structure is a bit weird, but it's alright.
Track in general lacks juice, to be honest. Doesn't make me wanna dance.
Melody is pretty nice though. I'm sure you can do better next time!

Thanks, and have fun!