Good track, it is very interesting how you mix the sound effects to shape this somewhat strange atmosphere, but I would say that you still lack some technique in composition.
Well, I hope you can use my opinion.
This song was a doozy to finish. During the drop, I had hit a writer's block, and so after taking some time off I chose to actually glitch the first part of the drop and really mess with it. I got some really interesting drum beats and sound from it. I was not unhappy. This song is also the most melodically sound, and... it is another frankenstein, sampling "Trip While You Skip" and an old song of mine called "Lion's Roar", which sampled an unfinished song called "Biting Me". I need some new sample sources don't I? XD All of them are cleared though, all of them are public domain.
Good track, it is very interesting how you mix the sound effects to shape this somewhat strange atmosphere, but I would say that you still lack some technique in composition.
Well, I hope you can use my opinion.
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