Woah, the beat is fire. Love the female vocal sample(?) in the backround and the laid back feel to it in general. Sick rap with dope lyrics, hope all is good. I find music is a great medium for expression and you have more than done that good sir=)
Drip drop in the basin
What is this, (tears)
Wash away the pain that im facing
I aint even lived
Living to die
Against the dire-tides
I’m feeling fucking tired Perhaps this
its time for me to finally just give
Up on this, down with dep
Pression on impressions
Pulling hair out
Why im stressingi can feel my flesh is
Burning like a symptom
Of a fucking gift that gives
From one lover to another
mother, fuck her, bitch
Cant seem to scratch the surface
But its purpose is to itch
Cut away the layer.
Layer after layer player
Player i’dn’t even played her
But I married her and laid her
Wish someone sing me a prayer
for this shit
But I guess it could been worse
If it coulda then it woulda
At least we didnt break a broken home
and have some fucken broken kids
Got my heart pulled
Grown man card pulled
like a dam fool
My heart is pounding up against on my ribs
Cos the whole stiuation
Got me smelling like some shit
Nothing but a bunch of bullshit
Dribbles from her lips
Wipe away the tears
After seven years
Its time for me to finally
Time to Cross her name up off this list
Wake up and i wonder
if this is the finsh
never ending nightmare
Cos every single day I wish
There was a way to do over
Was it a mistake
To let her take and take
Until I had nothing left to give?
Woah, the beat is fire. Love the female vocal sample(?) in the backround and the laid back feel to it in general. Sick rap with dope lyrics, hope all is good. I find music is a great medium for expression and you have more than done that good sir=)
Yo, I loved this! The lyrics are so powerful! One note though, the "Player i’dn’t even played her" sample sounds like it wasn't quantized. If you recorded that sample playing live, I would suggest going in and fine tuning the notes. Idk what program you're using (maybe the one that came with your mpc?), but if you ever want help or tutorials, I'd love to help! I'm doubling down on rap/trap, and would love to work with you more. You are a great rapper!
Much love Suco, stay strong brother!
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