Hey, I finally got time to listen to this!
Like your opening chords, and the development at 18 secs. Could probably bring that synth down just a little bit for effect, have it swell in. Your lead is quirky and interesting, mellow. The high synth that comes in after I'd take down just a little.
Your percussion is about .1 or .2 db louder than I'd like, but that's better than being quiet. By 1:33 I think it's fine, but I'd still bring it down .1
The track itself plods along merrily and without any jarring transitions, which is great. You've really come far in the past few years. I'm super proud of you.
Now, this isn't my genre, but it's not offensive to listen to at all, and I don't have the desire to skip. That's a high compliment. It's long for my tastes, but by no means bad at all. Great work :)