Very nice song dude!
Hey this is chronamut - here under a new account, here to give you a review - just started resubmitting music so check it out if you get a chance :)
Now on to your review.
The lyrics for this are rather humorous. It's goofy but it tries to sound serious at the same time hehehe.. The stereo separated part at :55 sounds a bit awkwardly done though I will admit... but it's still a nice effect :)
not sure what sfx that is in the bg I am hearing..
I like the little embellishments in the middle :)
and yeah it's kinda kurt kobainish - but your voice would have to be super raspy hahaha..
overall cool track man!
fifened and tened!