I like it. It ends kind of abruptly though. Nice work.
I agree with the ending not being there, but the song overall was good, and like wyldfyre1 said, it just takes practice... I know this was made a long while ago, and your music has come a long way. perhaps a remix should be in the works sometime. I think it could be something everyone could enjoy if you went back to work on it. 9/10 because the ending felt like the song just gave up. "So keep on it my friend!"
It isn't your best, very good though, i like it!! The part from 0:50 to 1:05 is really cool, if you'd make a whole song like this it would be fantastic
interesting mix :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.