great

that is one of the ballinest melodies out there. good job

woo?

Hey, hows it going, I just thought I would review your music you have here.

First off, you have a nice melody going, simple drums, maybe a little too simple though. all in all, it is a good song, however, you do need a few things in there.

1: Your song lacks bass, which I shall hereby refer to as the middleman. You know how most people are telling you to cut out the middleman, well don't listen to them, the middleman is your friend, he makes songs good, leave him in there. I mean seriously, if someone tells you they cut out the middleman, don't listen to them, they probably have bad music anyway.
2: the melody is a little fast for my taste, this however is not a bad thing, you might want to search for "Dimrain47" if you like this kind of music.
By the by, let me know when you make a new song, I'd like to see how you progress.
Also, it must have taken a damn long time to make that melody.
practice makes perfect :P

((VOTED 5))

I liked this one. It was very original. I dont think I have heard a song that even remotely sounded like this. The drums were really good in this song and the keyboard or whatever you want to call it was played greatly. You defiantly have some talent.