I like the warm pads at the beginning and the sample at :14 that sounds like a ballpark organ. The beat at :25 is also good, but I think the kick could've been a tad louder. I'd suggest using some more compression, in fact. The mix is pretty quiet in general in this piece. The secondary melodies at 1:06 are good in and of themselves, but run into the other melody a little too much for it to come off as pleasing. The piece alternates between a couple riffs for the rest of the piece without ever changing much in terms of emotion, dynamics, or energy. I think that's my main complaint, actually. You could've done a lot more to tell a story and provide a climax here, but instead the piece is marked by a lot of repetition and not much resolve. Overall, this is still a really cute track. My favorite elements are the mood and the instrumentation. Keep at it, man! ^^