I really hate giving negative feed back.
Fortunately, I'd have to look hard to find it here!
I rated this 5/5. :)
Great job! There is a followable tune, the bassline is pronounced.
But.....What the heck on that end??? haha.
I use LMMS also, and recently I have gotten quite a bit better at it. I used to be terrible, but, I'm starting to get used to it. 1 piece of advice keep practicing!
get to know what style of music you like to produce, and focus on that!
I've been using LMMS for around 2 or 3 months now, and I see potential in that program.
Stick with it, and you'll be producing amazing tracks one day!