Is it okay if i'll "love you." instead? Melodies or "love me" parts are pretty cool, although those more random and dissonant "fear me" parts don't feel right, or scary, more like "oops i've played a bunch of wrong notes very quickly" also in the beginning there was too much of that one note tension. 1:57+ feels like a completely different song though, isn't really related to the other half, i get that you were going for the contrast but for me it just didn't feel right, maybe separating the halves into 2 songs would be more appropriate, in my opinion at least.