I like the atmospheric vibe at the beginning. Has a dreamy, trance-like quality, and the entrance of the pads at :15 helps amplify that effect. I think I recognize the instrument at :27. Is it from Sakura by any chance? Nice job with the build-up, and the drop felt rather cathartic, albeit slow-paced. The chord progression is a little cliche, and the piece has a lot of repetition during the second intro-buildup-climax cycle. The mixing and mastering is really strong overall, but I think you may have overdone the reverb a bit. I also wish you would've varied the melody a bit more by the end of the piece. It's a satisfying melody, yet pretty simple both harmonically and rhythmically. Overall, this is strong work. My biggest complaints are the lack of variety and the generic compositional choices. Keep up the good work, man! ;)