Im speechless at how you are such an unrecognized talent omfg
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Im speechless at how you are such an unrecognized talent omfg
thank you, we just dont have the marketing
I like the atmospheric vibe at the beginning. Vocals are really good - relaxing and well-mixed. I like the change-of-pace of the lyrics at :40. Overall, the production quality is great too. At 1:53, I think I can hear you receiving a text. :'D Noticed it on the 2nd or 3rd listen. If I had to criticize one thing, it might be that the harmonic texture isn't very well-varied. This piece is pretty short, so it might benefit from some kind of bridge where you increase the energy a bit more and go in a different direction with the instrumental. The piece is also a bit structurally repetitive. Slight variations in the melodic contour of the last refrain (2:14) would help hit it home. You also may have overused the transition with the chopped vocals at 2:13 (and other places). These are all small details, though. Your mixing has improved a lot, and you did a great job of giving the piece some shape between the refrains and instrumental filler sections. I really like how the filler sections expose those dreamy arpeggios. Keep up the great work, man!
Thank you! <3
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