the synth and drums were really clear but, yeah, ill agree with the dude below me that this needs more bass. however i also think that the drums themselves arent very intense/fast [see professional dnb stuff, dnb drum patterns are generally more energetic than this and the drums themselves are often more distorted], and the synth/melody makes this song sound like a circus or something, which isnt a good thing. often dnb doesnt even have a melody. but yeah. i think the synth should be switched out for something lower and more unfeeling, and the notes should be rearranged.
sorry if im being brutally honest, jst giving feedback. gj for starting in a new genre, though!!
check my stuff pretty plz! :D
you dont have to be sorry for being brutally honest. as a matter a fact, i think thats probably the best thing you could have done in this review because as you know this is a whole new genre for me. i dont know what to say except thank you very much for your constructive feed back you gave me. <3
:D. Well OK, it's not really perfect, it's good though, it's fine, it's alright. Advice: Add more bass, low sounds put the 'Bass' into the 'Drum and Bass'. But hell, even my DnB sounds nothing like professional DnB, check out my latest post to see for youself. We're all trying though, that's good enough. Keep it up! I'll give ye a 5 so that other people can see this and judge it (otherwise it 'disappears' before anyone gets to review it).
thanks for your support.. yeah. ill admit im fairly new to the whole DnB genre. thanx for giving me your advice about the bass noise. just for the record, this was intended to be a loop so in case your wondering, thats why its so short =P
thanx for your review