Amazing!!

I know I may be judging this heavily, but it's for good reason. The song itself isn't that bad, but it's lacking in the verses a bit. Melody and chords are fine, but it needs something a bit more, and percussion within the verses has mastering a bit off. Along with that, the drop is the big killer, and I mean literally. Everything that comes out of the drop completely kills the entire mood that the rest of the song gives, and even then the drop is just tons of random sounds. No backup chords to help it, not even a baseline. Just the odd electro-saw, kick, snare, and hi-hat. The sound doesn't even match well melodically with the rest of the song, never mind the huge departure from the song it is in terms of sound and volume. It just kills the song way too much for me. It had so much potential, and then the drops made me lose all of it.

Ideas on Improving:
1. Better mastering for percussion in verses/buildups
2. Change the drop saw (Not too much, just enough to make sense in this kind of song)
3. Add more to the drop, such as bassline, chords, even a lead to place in the rests made by the big saw and laughing (which the laughing was a nice touch)
4. End of buildup ("Are you ready *scream*") - Change to it fits a bit smoother, or just change to more laughter (again, I love the laughter used in this track)
5. End of drop (laughter section) - have it blend into the next verse

Final Rating: 2/5

- Shadowscape, AKA SlashDaUmbreon