Funny loop

Ooooo!

I really like how this sounds, I can't wait to hear what the full version sounds like!

Demo or not, this is definitely worth 10 stars!

Sounds pretty sweet

Can't wait for the full version.

Good start

I usually love everything you make, and this could be pretty awesome. I personally thought the Synth was pretty cool, unique sounds = good, but within reason.

Hope this helps a little, it would be easier for me to critique if it was finished :D

((VOTED 3))

Ehh a few simple things could have made it a lot better. First of all you MUST make the quality better if you want it to be good. I heard a lot of fuzz in this. Second of all please add some drums. Without drums a song is nothing. A non ambient song without a beat is dead before it was ever a live. And lastly, try and take the time to make it something different. Make it stand out. Do something with the melody that no ones ever done before. People may hate it or people may love it. It is a risk you have to take.