The intro is really cool! One thing I have to say about it though is that the drums are really out of place, as is the piano. Try a new sound. Also, the tempo change is shocking. If you like it, you do you.
The good things are you combining your style with this weird dubstep thing. It soudns good and original. Also, it could be a music bit for a battle scene. Nice job!
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Here we are. Yeah, now I am mainly doing tracks in FL Studio 12.
So, I used a lot of plugins such as GMS, Morphine, PoiZone. Also, I finally figured out how to use automations. And yeah, I finally created something like a drop. Maybe.
Please write a short constructive review so I can improve.
UPD: And know why are you lowering your votes ;-;
Quite an improvement from Unstable. I really like the drops. You're getting closer and closer to Xtrullor's style! Some of the sound choices are weird but still quite unique. The beginning sequences, either before or after drops, are not as good as say the drops (I really really like the drops), but better than your previous songs. For the piano at the beginning, I would make it lower pitched and add higher, less frequent tones along with it so that it doesn't sound bad. Also for the choir, maybe I'd suggest something different as it sounds iffy. Also you should make it part of the background noise, not melody, like the choir should play whole notes instead of being identical to the beat.
Erso responds:
Yeah, I think you're right about the choir. For strengthening up the melody I definitely don't need to use something like choir or strings as it's meant to be a beatiful long sound for harmonization.
I liked the second drop myself. I think the first one was kinda "unstablish" yet I have this messy but powerful second one :D
Couldn't really understand what did you want to say about the piano. Did you mean the repeating notes sound bad?
Please dm me so I can get your review more exactly.
Overall a decent song, you should really work on your mix and mastering tho...
Cymbal in the start is overpowering any other instrument and the choir at the start is just really loud compared to the rest. Also, it sounds kinda messy at the drop at 2:09 but I guess that's just the song.
3.5/5 potatoes because mix/master is off but it's still a decent song!
Erso responds:
Oh, thanks for the review. I'm trying to do things with mixing and mastering, but it doesn't end well cuz when I think it's good enough, others think it isn't :/ Same option with cymbal. Everyone has complaints about the thing that it's too loud, but for me it never was. But I'll make it quieter in my future projects, thank you again.
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