Decent... um

however if your doing house you'd be putting in funky breakbeats, and pounding beats, or you make it deep and smooth. however heck you do have potential, and this is a um... song by an actual House DJ out there, that has vocals but... Not saying anything in fact It sounded, k.

Great Job! Man!

This isn't really House music...

...it's more like some weird Hip Hop music, or industrial, yeah, that's it, definitely defiitely not house. House is like Dance, it has a loop of a good, constant beat, and some riffs. Very simple though, very easy to use in a flash...dooooon't exactly understand the title...