Wasn't bad dude.
Could use some tuning up, though. Keep up the good work! ^_^
2 reviews with the same words hmmmmmmm??? Well anyways WIP means Work in Progess anbd my songs arent gonna be fully done,....well if its on here it aint.
roll up, roll up
for your third page of audio this sounds a bit budget.. hang on, you just threw in the circus run-down, i see the irony now, i take back my crude remark... hang about, it's finished...
yeh, whats up brother? finish this track, it just starts to kick along nicely then you gave up
See the problem is that I have no clue how to finish a DNB song. I just know how to make the main beat and repeat it over and over. Plus my sound system has no bass so I can't have the full effet others may have.
I expect more from you
I'll be honest, I didn't want to review this song. The words demo, "work in progress", and preview always prevent me from taking a look. I just don't see the point when we can't delete or edit our entries. You might as well post one version and only your final version. Well, you got lucky in two ways. First you posted above me in the Audio Advertisement and secondly I just so happen to respect the notion of reviewing two posts above on the Ad forum.
But enough of the damn jibber jabber. What you have here is a simply a work in progress, just like you labled it. It starts out pretty nice and then goes no where. Its just ends.
And typically drum N bass utilizes a drum loop with much faster tempo. Maybe my ears deceive me but it sounds like you sampled various drums and not an actual drum loop. Thus, it seems, the song ended up sounding slow, boring and truly more hip hop than DnB. Don't get me wrong though, I'm not knocking you for posting in the wrong genre or making a bad song, just kind of spelling out my thoughts as they appear from listening to this song. In my reviews, the quality of the song always stays the same despite what genre it is.
The two pads or synths you used in the intro were quite unique and interesting. The more wavy one was unfortunately quite annoying. The song could have benefited much from it's absences.
The what-I-can-only-describe-as-a-circus-song sample - worked out for you here. If you had kept it more in key somehow, it might have been better, but it was good and I liked it. I can definitely say I did not see it coming.
I'm no stranger to your music, Para-Noid, and thats why I'm being harsh on this one. With some actual effort, I think you could have made this into a decent, full length track. Maybe the full length - if you choice to do one of course - will sound much better. Keep up the good work and please spare us the demos. By the way I did not vote on this.
Yeah, For now on I will not be giving a full song on newgrounds for various reasons. So mostly the songs you see from me now are previews and demos and WIP. But don't worry I will be submitting some ful songs every once in awhile.
Sweet man...REAL sweet!
Drum and Bass isn't my thing but Im loving the PADS. There nicely put in. Sounds great on my system a high birate rate? The beat was solid and not much else to say. I'd love to hear the full.