Track sounds overcompressed, with kicks too loud. Recommend taking everything down until you've got about 6 dB headroom before mixing down (and by that I mean before any mastering compression is applied), and mixing the tracks the way you want them without any FX on the master bus. The master bus is not the shit-in-good-out joint.
Guitars are laying down in the mix. Can't hear the bass. Of course, this is mostly because the drums are covering them up, and it seems like the track has either been compressed hard, or just mixed down with output in the red. On analog systems, this might be okay, but digital isn't going to distort like analog -- it'll just clip and crackle.
That said, great melodies, great writing. Did get my foot tapping. :)
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