I really like this alot! The only thing I feel could be significantly better is your mixing and use of percussions. I'd get my hands on some Taiko program if I were you rather than just toms. At least put reverb and digital multiply on them to make them boom. I really think this combo of electronic is really cool. It's like Two Steps from Hell | Heart of Courage meets Ben Gold x Omnia | The Gateway. I'd also like there to be some flowing sections and longer, thicker (that's what she said) strokes of the bow out of the strings section to really make that hit you. It's the same effect as Teminite's THICC chord progressions he totally leans on that make him such a fruckin god. What program are you using btw? Whatever it is, you have really good ideas and a good sense of balance in a string orchestra. Keep it up!