Hi from "Clickertale 2"!

This one is very nice, although there are places it can be better this time.

The main one being that your main section melodies sound very confused and out of place (1:22 in the track and dotted among the rest of it). Not completely, but it sounds like someone improvising badly whilst listening to the background. It just feels a bit "off".

Melodies aside I don't really feel the mixing is too up to scratch here either. Levels aren't really managed correctly and I hear the drums struggling a lot behind the rest of the elements in the track. EQ and Side chain are your friends, cut out clashing frequencies on parts that don't need them (Low cutting your bass isn't bad because it gives your kick more room to breathe, just don't go OTT or it wont be a bass any more) Also the synth at 1:22 has too much treble, way too much. It cuts through you similar to nails on a chalk board, that needs some of its higher frequencies filtering out.

I've seen inside a couple of your project files and I know for a fact that mixing is your main weakness right now. Id recommend finding some proper tutorials for mixing online.

Its not bad, but two key things you need to work on a bit are your melodies, and mostly your mixing.

Just a bit of constructive criticism, really hoping you take it to heart

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