Intro is rather annoying. Might want to make all the voice sounds far less penetrating. I had to turn down my volume to make this not so grading. For a DnB song, the drums are somehow the least noticeable thing. You might want to correct this and give them a good punch forward in the mix, and throw those voices back.

Wherever the bassline is, I can't even notice it.

The song could use a lot more variation, as well as at least one section that stands out from the rest.

Drums could also use far more variation.

The song could also benefit from a proper outro.

Overall, needs a lot of work. Sorry if this isn't the review you want to hear, but as it stands now, I just can't enjoy this. Good ideas, but needs more solidification.