I'm sorry, but that was weak. Copy paste, always the same reverb, no variations or such, boring bassline and so on. If you would have made a Bass-hop or a more Solid sound as your melody, It would be better in my opinion.
A Chopped and Screwed Cloud rap track, except it's not a remix but the original :)
Lyrics :
Les lois les billets et les sodas sont violets
Les samples les cachets les purple sont volé.e.s
Je joue je rap je fume toujours en Chaotic Good
J’imite Yung Lean j'bois d’la lean l’instru est chopped and screwed
J’partirais comme DJ Screw
Rien qu’là je tiens plus debout
J’suis comme Kirby et Robert Miles j’suis dans Dreamland
J’ralentis l’temps j’suis l’archennemi d’Barry Allen
I'm sorry, but that was weak. Copy paste, always the same reverb, no variations or such, boring bassline and so on. If you would have made a Bass-hop or a more Solid sound as your melody, It would be better in my opinion.
I don't agree on everything you said, especially that no mesure is the same and there's not much copy paste, but thanks for the constructive review anyway :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.