Actually this sounds like the tune/beat of a professional song.
Originality: Never really heard dance before. Sounds really good.
Diversity: Look above. Never really heard dance. Can't really judge in this part. Oh well, the less I heard the better your score.
Clarity: The beginning is soft but I guess that's a characteristic of this song. Slow and soft. Perfect.
Effort: I'm guessing you put a lot of effort into this. If not, oh well.
It was a pretty good song. I didnt really think of it as dance that much though. More something to bop my head to. The beat was nice and all but I think there was a little to much emphysis on the drums, especially when your trying to make a dance song. The piano or synthesizer or whatever was nice too. Mixed well with the drums.