I hate to vot so low, but you make me look like Ozzy. Good attempt though. Try to get a better song program, I used to use one that sounded like in 2006. Try Reason, thats what I use. also get a better mic for christ sake. 80 bucks and u can get a good head set by Razer that will work sufficient. Plus singing lessons wouldn't be a bad idea ether.
People will like this alright, its a big hit. Great vocals and fake guitar.
Please dont take me seriously.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.