Man you REALLY have to use more reeverb. Then the song is perfect!!
I loved the melodie.
Make more stuff like this, It is good, but use more reeverb.
Nóthing Wrong With This!
The synth at the start is nice, a little unprofessional sounding, but the melody is nice that it plays, so no worries there.
Onto the bassline, wahey! A kickbasskickbass, and a double layer bass (Two Lines). Highly complex to get it right but highly effective!
You've got it right here, but the bass is so quiet, maybe double each bass, because the synth is all i can hear!
Beat is a little weak, but nothing too noticable. The clap is pretty common but still good, and the cymbals are mixed nicely.
Starting the track with the main melody has given me a few ideas. I'm thinking of making a track like, Joop - The Future.
Anyway, i enjoyed it, and hope it gets recognised this time!