Hm, I'm fairly impressed!
From what it sounds like, you've been getting a lot better. There were many things that this song could have used, but it sounds FAR better than pretty much all of your old material. Me being me, I think that the specific rythms you used for the piano note progression would fit slightly better with a simple saw with a chorus on it, or perhaps even a slightly detuned sytrus saw with unison order of 4 with the unison pitch set to about 45%. It just sounds to me like your music would fit better under the trance category with different synths and a nice beat underneath everything. Of course, that's probably just me, but hey, you never know. Anyway, very nice work!
6/10
You've gotten a heck of a lot better, keep on going man!
-Manmademusic