Wasn't bad dude.
Could use some tuning up, though. Keep up the good work! ^_^
...decent melody you got going with that phased synth, sounds inspired by DMX...
Anyway, the track feels quite empty, it seem to be only the phased synth and a loop playing. How you've managed the loop/samples I don't know, but I think you should have experimented both with adding subtle effects like reverb, and process it with EQ and compression to make it sound more meaty.
Compared with thr original song you made, it's alot clearer though, and the beat ain't distorting as much as it does in the original.
Make sure to check your levels when mixing. If the stereo bus out hits red (more than 0dB), you're distorting.
As for the song itself, I would definitley like to hear more variety.
Yeah, see this is something I whipped up in 10 minutes maybe? I was just going through all my old stuff and thought "Hey, I should remix it". I am working on a DNB right now so that's why I didn't have the patients to work hard on this. See, if this was on a CD or something this would be on an EP, or a mixtape.