awsome!

yo man im new to this website and im checking out kool techno music and i hear this one is pretty awsome it can be played in like a club or something keep the begginign the way it is man and then switch it up not to much of a different sound but different and finish it man i definitly wanna hear it at the end but dont change the beggining its awsome well get bak to me if u finish it

Heya

This song is awesome, I can see what you want to show, but it seems that you need to improve your mastering skills. The beats are what I'd call sub-audible on this song.. the biggest thing is the bassline which have 2 synths and goes over the real melody.. reviewing the whole mastering would make it an awesome song.. Keep it up I like your work.. but I could love it you know :P

Wet but original

You need some dry synths (all of your synths are wet)

As well, some phasing might be good for the 16th bass notes.

I like the progression (never heard it before) so i''m going to give you a 5/5.

Please rate/review my work back.

WOW!

This is an amazing track of tremendous quality trance music. The only reason I have it an 8 for effort is that it needs to be longer, 48 seconds is too short for this. If you just make this a little longer it will be great stuff. It is in the top 10 for my favorite tracks on the portal. I can't get enough!

Sounds good.

You should add some soundeffects, liek different instruments, it sounds HappyHardcore almost. It's pretty cool, I like it. It doesn't really need too much improving, all you really have to do is finish it.