T-Y-Z-E-R Ft. DJDj- Untitled

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T-Y-Z-E-R Ft. DJDj- Untitled

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[[It's a beat from, it's a, it's a beat from
It's beat from, it's a, it's a beat from
It's a beat from it's a it's a beat from
It's a beat from, it's a beat from
TYZER]]

[Chorus]
Can anybody say
That they had knew this
Every day
I'm goin through this
Can anybody say that they had known

I just wanna be something you love
Not something that you dispose of
Just wanna be something you love

[Verse]

Another beat from T-Y-Z-E-R
We leave em none the wiser
Schedule a school assembly
And watch as we fill the risers

Order an appetizer
Cut with a tranquilizer
Ride on my synthesizer
And become my sympathizer

Bite down on my advice, sir
From canine to incisor
I am the supervisor and the people
Can't decypher

The crazy words I say
The dif'rent games I play
Sit back and relax as I
Put your faults on my display

No changing what is true
I hate that I love you
I have to be a person
that is worse than
My world view

Because I can't pull through
The feelings I subdue
I forgot it and audit
Internal revenue

Ser-vice
Because I know you're
Worth it
And even though I'm
Ner-vous
I won't forget my
Pur-pose
In earn-est
I'm sure-this
Is not another
Cir-cuit
A circle through a
Fur-nace
Melting my
Epi-derm-is
To pour into my
Ther-mous
[Breath] drink it to
Resur-face
But it is my
Observ-ance
That I will always
Hurt-this
Because I'm always
Nervous
Because I know you're
Worth-it
Because I know my
Purpose
why must I know
You're worth it

[Chorus]

[Verse]
Now
It's high time for my redemption
It wasn't my intention
To carelessly have mentioned
The people causing the tension
I guess I'll take my pension
Leadin to my ascension
Or possibly suspension
With a worthless work extension

We simply never know
Where we seem to find a flow
Rock it steady
To and fro
Lock onto my au-di-o
May the blessings ov-er-flow
Burn My deadly to-bac-co
Step into my stu-di-o and
Welcome to the pup-pet-show
Dif'rent kind of ro-de-o
Dig my ruthless stac-cat-o?
We can do it to-mor-row
Fly me to mar-a-lago
Roll with Trump to to-ky-o
Yeah it's all jus sta-tus-quo
With a hopeful un-der-toe and I'll
Ignore the ra-ti-o

[Chorus x2]

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MaoDaMighty

2018-03-10 19:56:05

Def a step up on the wordplay here, the rhymes are dope, but a couple felt a bit forced or awkward in the "izer" and "ension" schemes. Mixing, dubs and SFX were on point, I like the layered chorus. Your delivery on the verses does have a "whiney" sound to it, specifically in the first verse due to the kinda spontaneous intonations you throw in your voice (almost like a voice crack); I like it, makes it sound angsty . Beat is dope, props to Tyzer on the sickness.

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Thank you, Mr. Mao. Always a pleasure to have you observe my work. Thank you for the positivity in your critique, but also the honesty you put forth.

I've been working on the word play. And when I get a better Mic, that whiney intonation will be lessened.

I'm glad you enjoyed! I'll keep working at it. I want to be the very best, like no one ever was.

-DJDj

alicemargiela

2018-03-10 12:53:27

Beats are amazing however, they were ruined by the excruciating vocals. Tone down the "whiney" voice a notch next time. The lyrics were decent though. Keep at it

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Roger that. I had noticed some sound quality issues, too. I'll check on the EQ for those vocs. Check back in the future, it may be updated.

~DJDj

T-Y-Z-E-R

2018-03-09 20:48:54

you have a great talent I like your style, good luck for you great job!

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Thanks, man! I always love using your beats. Never stop creating!

-DJDj