I thought it was pretty good but it has to much going on at once. Try and get it to make sure two or more things go together before putting it on, and try and look at it from another persons perspective. Good luck with your next song.
While I agree that it is quite busy and there are moments when the music seems to not fit together, but I actually like that in music. People have differrent tastes, which makes "good music" and "bad music" just opinion. Thanks for your review.
Sounds really really god. I like that you posted two versions of it.
The quality of this version is better, than the one with vox samples. That and I tweaked the drums a bit, since apparently the last version was unsatisfactory to some.