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Apr 12, 2007 | 7:03 AM EDT
File Info
1.8 MB
1 min 57 sec
2.37 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.37 / 5 stars
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656 Plays | 110 Downloads
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

hey i'm back....with a demo :(,but its super hot. don't mind the first note



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


i will be frank with you, it has ALOT of room for improvement.

to start out with, you absolutley have to stop using that gay FL voice generator! you're better off recording yourself speaking, it just sucks. the notes have random dynamics, bad pronunciation, and it is just plain cheap and overused.

the brassy synth that comes in right after...well, cool use of a fade in, but you sort of overdid it. it almost killed my ears. it was way too loud. i dunno, it wasnt that great of a synth either. it was pretty low quality and buzzy, choose some better ones, like tweak/master the generator presets on FL.

good beats you have there, im glad you diversified the percussion. you really needed a kick though. the snare was pretty punchy, a sturdy dance snare, but kick/hat isnt really good in techno. not too big of an issue. overall, good job with that.

needs more of a melody though. plus you have what, 5 instruments in there? come on man, diversify it up a little. use a better, stronger bass. more sounds. better sounds. that's all you really need to do. 3/5.


Mr-green-apple responds:

thx for the critique. its very informative. the synth at the begining is supposed to be a bit filthy but ill fix a lil. i know i cam do better im just a huge noob tho.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


some of the synths you used were way too fucking loud. the bass sucked, but the percussion isn't all too bad, or the composition. if you do a full version, definitely work on the volume level of the synths, and find a better bass.

Mr-green-apple responds:

i kind of wanted a little more edgy synth but if people aren't liking it then i guess i'll have to rethink my approach. there is a lot of work left for this one...i understand that.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

woah i think this is ur best one

nice song loops nicely, and great melody.

only thing i can say about this is that the qaulity of the sounds isnt the best

but thats all i can say lol

nice job with this one